My Brother and I
We were crazy kids
my brother and I.
Running around
cheetah-like
around the grass
When papa mowed the grass
We were kfc kids
my brother and I.
birds cried
squawking-like
At the beach
when it was a sunny day.
We were funny kids
my brother and I.
cars flocked
geese-like
to the mall
when there were deals.
We were inside kids
my brother and I.
people fought
warrior-like
on the video game
when we lost at it.
We were crazy kids
we were kfc kids
we were kfc kids,I think you missed the last bit in the last paragarh
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sister and I but I did My Nana and I.
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